Please excuse the copywriter, it's been a whirlwind 10 days
of 2008. I'm a little late in getting this up. But I couldn't leave the auld
lang syne behind without mentioning a few noteworthy taglines that I noticed
during the blur that was this past holiday season. Maybe now that the rush is
past, we can all take a moment to analyze the copywriting and creative
presentations that emerged during the most competitive time of the year. Enjoy!
1. Happy Honda Days. Simple tagline, clever, stays with you.
Everyone knows that all the car dealers offer great prices at the end of the
year. But "Happy Honda Days" works because it's such a powerful play on words.
I don't even need to hear the rest of the ad to know that something's going on
there. Would I consider driving in on a whim on the way back from my holiday
shopping excursion? Sure, if I was in the market for a new vehicle, you bet I
would. "Think Honda for the Holidays," the announcer cheerfully suggests. Nice wrap-up line, smooth, works
for me!
Happy Honda Days: http://youtube.com/watch?v=wKp-QjNnD74
2. Yoplait. "It is SO good." Not really a holiday ad, but for
some reason I remember seeing this everywhere for the past few months. I think
I remember it because I find it annoying. Like you can just imagine all the
marketing people fretting around the conference table. "What can we write
that will really be 'on the level,' you know, resonate with the Ideal Yogurt
Customer?" And then the VP or someone blurts out that little gem. "It
is SO good." (And then they tell you HOW good in every commercial).
I could have stomached this if they'd used the contraction,
"It's so good." Seems more
timeless to me. When you change the "it's" to "It is," it
comes across in that pretentious Young People affect that I so detest. Why
don't they just add an "OMG?"
"OMG... it is SO. Good."
This yogurt tagline leaves a funny aftertaste. Even so... it
must work. I can't get it out of my head! And yet I remain a Dannon customer.
;) Have a look at these young boys and their parody of the Yoplait "So
Good" campaign: http://youtube.com/watch?v=jOAinRSASbM
3. Kia - "Maniac on the Sales Floor." I generally go light on the TV watching, and yet I managed to lose count of the number of times they
ran this ad. Not only is the sweaty sales guy with his flapping hair hilarious
doing the Flashdance impersonation, but I really love the very end, when you
catch a quick pan of a headless someone standing on a table in heels who then dumps a pail
of water over the dude's head ala Jennifer Beals. VERY funny and memorable. Still... will it turn
me into a Kia customer? Probably not. But
still - this ad campaign was fun, if Kia keeps it up they may just pave the way for the future
drivers of America.
Kia - Maniac on the Sales Floor: http://youtube.com/watch?v=Zs-G4YFdlMY
4. Pringle All the Way. I have absolutely no recollection of
ever laying eyes on this commercial when it was playing. And yet,
the minute I heard them utter the words "Pringle All the Way" I was
overjoyed at the campy wordplay. Who can forget
the old "Who's got the fever for the flavor of a Pringle" from
campaigns gone by? Two thumbs up for Pringles, nice to see you guys saving face
in the highly competitive snack food market.
Pringle All the Way - http://youtube.com/watch?v=97DR2QEWPrI
5. The Magic of Macy's. Brilliant Fortune 500 advertising, as it should be. A whimsical fun-pokery at the good-natured expense of well-known celeb personalities. A not-so-subtle reminder that Macy's has
several Star Product Lines which add that "magic" to holiday gift
buying.
I'm embarrassed to say that I don't know all of these famous
people (that would be my lack of TV watching coming across)! I recognize (obviously) Martha Stewart, Jessica Simpson, Donald Trump
and Emeril. Everyone is in character, and Jessica Simpson gives the world permission to mock
her dizzy personality (who knows, maybe she didn't even know the joke was on her, a.k.a.
The Christmas lights are on, but no one's home??)
Magic of Macy's - http://youtube.com/watch?v=UdpkdcvGAaA
6. 2007 Mac Holiday Ad: I'm not so sure that the Mac holiday commercial of 2008 was their best advertising work. You have the PC guy getting his line in about "Buy a PC
and not a Mac" which is supposed to be backward, nerdy humor of sorts. But the truth
is: is it really wise to make a joke like this when you've got 30 or 60 seconds
to say what needs to be said at the height of the holiday rush? Or will we assume that the Mac audience is so
intellectually superior that we don't have to "spell it out for them?" Yeah, it's a
Mac ad, I get it. But... ehhh.
To me, it seems like they spent a lot more time getting the
animation just right than they did on the copywriting. And who knows, maybe
they were under a time constraint, which is certainly understandable. But I
will say one thing about Mac. They're actually DOING something. Even if their
holiday ad was "cute yet strange," the real point is that they had a
holiday ad. Can you say the same for your business? If not, you know who to call. (Okay, I'll spell it out: email dina@wordfeeder.com!)
I know that a lot of my copywriting customers stress and
fret over "getting it exactly right." When you spend too much time doing
that, you miss out on the whole point, which is getting exposure. So do like
Mac did this past holiday season: just write your ad the best you can, put it out there
and move on to the next project.
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